Your layout is there and the basic jist of this is good. But, do you think it's appropriate to have such little care for the mise en scene that Luke still has on his student ID badge? This automatically does not make this work fit for purpose. Much Much more care needs to be taken here. In addition to this you need to look closely at how you have edited your image and the size and impact of your masthead. It's not prolific enough nor does it grab your reader's attention.
May I suggest that you reshoot your images with a more defined choice of Mise en Scene and we look again at this cover as at the moment it looks like an anger management magazine for a business. SHIRTS AND TIES BELONG IN NO MUSIC MAGAZINE!!!!!!!
Your layout is there and the basic jist of this is good. But, do you think it's appropriate to have such little care for the mise en scene that Luke still has on his student ID badge? This automatically does not make this work fit for purpose. Much Much more care needs to be taken here. In addition to this you need to look closely at how you have edited your image and the size and impact of your masthead. It's not prolific enough nor does it grab your reader's attention.
ReplyDeleteMay I suggest that you reshoot your images with a more defined choice of Mise en Scene and we look again at this cover as at the moment it looks like an anger management magazine for a business. SHIRTS AND TIES BELONG IN NO MUSIC MAGAZINE!!!!!!!
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ReplyDelete(The cover on the right.)
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